HAM
tell me i’m pretty
whisper sweet
nothing
in my ear
tell me i need to eat
that i’m already skinny enough
but i can’t explain
to you
that if i can
starve this
beast
inside me
maybe you’ll tell me
i’m more than just
pretty
look with your heart
and stop telling these
—l(eyes)
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