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Hello, I'm going through old green room works and came across this one :) The language is very nice and flowery here, and I appreciate the emotion behind this piece, ...

Hello! Well, this is very clearly an advert for your company or the company you work at, which you have cleverly disguised as a short story. I'm not totally sure ...

Hi! I'm here to review this poem for you today. I'll be honest; the meaning of this was lost on me for a few minutes as I read it. I ...

Hi there! I think this is a great poem. I can really feel the emotional desperation behind it, and it portrays the feeling very well. The structure is also really ...

Hi Dom. Apologies that it has taken me so long to get to this chapter! I love the way the story progresses here, and the characters are consistently strong, so ...

But when her gaze met the man's, she found herself lost again in the alpine. I understand this is a short story that throws us right into it, hence, there ...

Hi! I saw you said this is your first poem in English, so I wanted to congratulate you and hopefully give some useful feedback! Firstly, 'who I will' does not ...

Hey creeper! This is such a fun song/poem about LJ. It really encapsulates the clown side in a fun, bouncy way but keeps creepiness underneath! So they say that the ...

This is a very beautiful poem! I read in your reply below that you are a beginner, and yet this seems like the work of someone truly talented! There are ...

Hi Creeper! We're back to Zara now, yay! Zara never felt more at home than in her spider-cluttered apartment. Her parents never liked the spiders, but that was alright. They ...

hi moon, hope you're good. This is a bittersweet poem. I can definitely relate to it; I often played by myself as a child. I like that you begin by ...

Hi there! This is an interesting and emotional premise for a short story. The protagonist thinks he is being cheated on, but finds out that his wife actually has cancer. ...

Hi Hira. I like the idea behind this poem. I am fascinated by the self, by performance, identity, and how our bodies and minds are separate and yet one, so ...

Hello! “Abby, care to tell us why you brought a wooden Jack-in-the-box toy to our conference meeting? Is this a new prop?” Ms. Mallow asked, narrowing her eyes at the ...

Okay I have been anticipating this chapter so much, I hope one day you publish this story so I can mention it in my research (no pressure, no pressure) I ...