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  • Poetry » General, General Re: when i am old

    thank you so much for the review, Lim! You're right on the mark with it being about continued closeness and intimacy in a relationship. I suppose my idea was that ...

    Sep 26
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Crawlers - Chapter Nineteen: The Warehouse

    i will respond in proper detail tomorrow, but I think the pacing issues you identified are very right, and a few plot issues i should definitely reclarify, so thank you ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fy enw i yw // my name is

    thank you so much Juke! This was a great review, and I understand and agree with all your suggestions! I'm not Welsh, but i have lived in Wales for a ...

    Sep 25
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when i am old

    Don't apologise! Thank you so much for the review, it really means a lot. I like your interpretation of it being about someone being used and/or degraded in a relationship. ...

    Sep 25
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fy enw i yw // my name is

    (fy enw i yw is welsh for 'my name is') text version: fy enw i yw // my name is i understand it now, that feeling that sinking in the ...

    Sep 25
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the mess of me

    Thanks so much for the lovely review Alex! I would say both of your interpretations are correct and I love the way you explained your thoughts! There is also a ...

    Sep 25
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the mess of me

    Ah amazing, yeah you’re completely right, I was worried that it hadn’t come through clearly so thank you!

    Sep 25
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the mess of me

    thanks for reviewing, i'm interested in what you personally understood the poem to mean? I had something very specific in mind when i wrote it and i'm not sure about ...

    Sep 24
  • Poetry » General, General Re: homebody//homecoming

    text version: homebody//homecoming i am back in the womb it is like a warm and sticky summer’s night when we had blood-red jam on our hands and purple bruises on ...

    Sep 24
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the mess of me

    text version: the mess of me when i turn the page, my heart hurts a dull ache that i think you know well i feel a prick in the corner ...

    Sep 24
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when i am old

    text version: when i am old when i am old will you fold me up until i slot between the pages of your favourite book when i am old will ...

    Sep 24
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm

    Hi Alex!! Aaa thank you, i love long reviews, they are sooo helpful so don't worry! Firstly, I completely understand about the pronunciation! However, these are Welsh words and names, ...

    Sep 23
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: I WITH THEM

    oo okay that makes sense! I was taking it too literal i think, and thinking, can liquor actually rot?? but that is a very nice line now i know the ...

    Sep 22
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Love That Never Happened

    @AlexWrites sorry for some reason it didn't tag you in the review so hopefully this works

    Sep 21
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i must let everyone i know know that i do things too

    “Spoons” is slang for “Wetherspoons” which is a chain pub/bar in the UK that almost every town has, so you're not missing out on a trend there haha I guess ...

    Sep 18


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening