Hana15

Hi, welcome to YWS! Just wanted to jump straight in a say I like your poem, but I do have a couple critiques. Undeniably, your poem has a purpose and ...

Hi, just going to jump straight in and say that I really love this poem. Using first perspective on a washing machine, an everyday object we commonly replace or discard, ...

Hi! Just going to jump right in a say this piece is quite nice; however, I do have a few critiques. Please don't take these to heart because I can ...

Hi! Overall this poem has a heart, but I think a lot could be refined. If you've experienced a panic attack, i'm so sorry! I hope you don't take my ...

Honest, first glance, this is a beautiful poem. It's all kind of vague but I think that substantially contributes to the whole purpose and vibe of the poem. I especially ...

This poem is actually beautiful! I really loved the lines: Dear diary, it began, in my handwriting, though I keep no diary that anyone else could find. It knew things ...

Hi! Immediately off the bat, the thing that caught me about your poem was the structure of the text slowly leaning from left to right. Also, the white text combined ...

Wow, this is an amazing poem! I absolutely love the line: her eggshell eyes ungleaming in the moonlight her deckled edges flipping sharply in the breeze her scarlet blush the ...