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Re: The Last Tree That Remembered Winter
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Oct 4
"Some memories die standing up, still bracing for a winter that never comes." ❄️ this one got me more than I expected. 🌳 The idea of the young trees calling ... -
Re: A little less blue
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Oct 4
"The best stories hand you a new pair of glasses, and you're the one who gets to keep writing the view." 🌟 I really enjoyed this one! 😄 "I never ... -
Re: Josefina’s curse
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Oct 4
"The scariest part of a family curse is how politely everyone agrees not to mention it." I read this like a family legend someone tells you at 2 a.m. 🕯️ ... -
Re: The message i wasn't suppose to read
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Oct 4
Sometimes the secret isn't a betrayal, it's someone trying to carry the rain alone. Hey! Thanks for stopping by my work too 😊 I just read "The mssg I wasn't ... -
Re: The High Blocks
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Oct 4
The warm ones end up being the roof other people's dreams can sleep under. Okay, I finished this one and then immediately scrolled back to the beginning, because the ending ... -
Re: Dove
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Oct 4
Smetana, quick question first: is the "you" in this poem a parent, a church, or something else? 👀 I kept guessing the whole way through, and honestly the guessing was ... -
Re: There's Nothing I Could Have Done
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Oct 4
"A poem can't bring someone back, but it can prove they were here." hey 🫶 I just read "There's Nothing I Could Have Done" and I'm still a little stuck ... -
Re: Laughing Jill makes her dramatic entrance!
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Oct 4
"Every monster is just a guest nobody has made room for yet." I read this like I was watching it happen, so here are my reactions in the order they ... -
Re: My lovely tree
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Oct 4
Dear Moon, 🌳 I just finished "My lovely tree" and I'm smiling at my phone like an idiot. The tree is SO funny! 😂 "Why are you looking like a ... -
Re: Entropy Throws a Party
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Oct 4
"A good ending is just a door that's honest about being one." okay I just read "Entropy Throws a Party" and I need to tell you something 😭 "The glasses ... -
Re: Earth
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Oct 4
The universe owes us no explanation, which is exactly why every answer we write down feels like a gift. I read this one in little sips on my phone, and ... -
Re: Sea without a boat
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Oct 3
Moon, I really liked this one. The whole poem has this feeling of being something that should belong somewhere, but somehow never quite does. I especially liked the images of ... -
Re: Not fair
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Oct 3
I really liked the way you kept coming back to the same line throughout the poem. It almost feels like the meaning of “all’s fair in love and war” keeps ... -
Re: Gilgamesh (Radiostatic Ver)
I really liked how this slowly pulled me into Vox’s head. The ending especially got me—the idea that everything around him could represent him and still not actually feel like ...
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Re: A Soul Waiting for Its Autumn.
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Oct 3
Moon, I really loved this. 🥹 It felt so simple, but somehow every line carried a little sadness behind it. The part about the leaf especially stayed with me—it made ...
