hira

Hey there! I absolutely loved it! Your poem is bursting with positivity and optimism as it narrates the story of a person who, regardless of all the hardships in his ...

Hey! I have to say a few words about this beautiful poem of yours! Firstly, I really like the way you try to imagine the existence beyond the known borders ...

Hey! I really liked this one. I think the use of light/sun imagery was really well done, especially since it creates this almost painful sensation, which then validates why the ...

Hi there! I really liked reading this! The style in which this poem was written is pretty distinct and surrealistic, and I loved the focus on the metaphors of memory, ...

Hey, I liked reading this, but I feel like the best part in the poem is repetition. The constant repeating of running, hiding, fighting, and trying to stop the man ...

Hey! I liked this, the premise of which hooked me right away. Having the moon disappear and the ocean die with it was a nice touch, as was tying it ...

hey! hira here to review! First off, I liked the ambiance of the chapter - the intro already creates a lot of confusion, and the description of the mysterious ballroom, ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! I liked how you contrasted the child’s wonder, viewing the world from the window with a heart full of joy and the adult’s fear ...