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Heyy, Cyan!! "how many red suns did they have to drown in this ocean to make it so green?" is such a beautiful start. It creates some beautiful imagery which ...

Hiya Nisfish!!♡ This poem was so unexpected! It starts off with the narrator thinking about leaving and what lies ahead but somehow ends up talking about a shiny bald man, ...

Heyy, Alice!! This is super nostalgic A Minnie Mouse bed, sticky stars on the ceiling & Orbeez everywhere u really nailed that awkward feeling of growing up and realising ur ...

Hey Ellie!!♡ Oh my god what have I just read The title caught my attention and the piece as a whole is so creepy. The first line says "Experience yourself ...

Hey Hira!!♡ Why are ur metaphors always making me question existence? The idea of Tomorrow employing a mapmaker to chart itself is already such a great one, but then you ...

Hey Hira!!♡ I love how u used the idea of Doubt as a beacon of hope. i love how u turned something that would typically be seen as hindrance and ...

Hey Hira!!♡ GIRL, YOU MADE ZERO AND ONE HAVE AN EXISTENTIAL CRISIS AND I'M HERE FOR IT. i love how u managed to take the most basic elements of the ...

Hey Hira!! how do your poems always manage to get me thinking about stuff I wouldn't have otherwise thought about today? I really love the idea of writing a letter ...

Hey Hira!!♡ I absolutely LOVED the idea of this piece. The idea of walking through a museum of self with rooms dedicated to who u were and who u could ...

Hey Hira!!♡ GIRL, it's SO GOOD i went in for a shadowed poem and stumbled upon a letter from my deepest desires! I actually loved these lines: I think some ...

heyy,Hira!!♡ GIRL, WHY DOES UR BRAIN COMES UP WITH THE IDEAS Such a fascinating idea because we consider the present as something that is real but u made it seem ...

hey hira!!♡ I just read ur beautiful work and WHY are u making me question my own brainn.... i really like the idea of this, we always assume that we ...

Okay hira, this got me thinking O_O I love the way u've taken a concept that we rarely question, that we choose our path and it determines our future, and ...

Hey, Maddox!! I have read ur beautiful work and i personally found the poem Sinner presented a soul chilling exploration of guilt, Christian imagery, and the way cruelty is masked ...

Hey, Writer!! I've read ur lovely work and personally i found both poems to be so sweet little journeys into Bee's everyday adventures. They're so sweet..... to read about how ...