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Re: Die or smile?
Who needs people? There have been times in my life where I've met sick people. or have heard of sick people. Where they hurt you, use words to beat you ...
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Re: I never imagined..
Hello! This poem is impactful and makes me feel deeply for your pain. that my wrist would become a space of scars, and my white floor turn crimson. This poem ...
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Re: Aftermath
War is a topic that I find to be beautiful and at the same time, tragic. It's horrifying, chaotic, ugly, and brutal. You wonder if the world truly is a ...
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Re: A Crimson Star
Guilt is an odd little thing. It follows you wherever you go, a reminder of how things went wrong. It comes in shapes, memories, and changes how we see the ...
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Re: I love you..
There's a grim and concerning quality that your poem expresses. Lovers fall in love with each other and normally, people would expect being in love makes you treat the other ...
Oct 13 -
Re: january's photographs were snowy white
When I read this work, the first thing I imagined was the cold. What this poem does well is that it does not state what's happening. It's fragmented, grammatically inconsistent, ...
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Re: Love and The Barrier
There's something painfully and awkwardly beautiful about falling in love with a fictional character. This poem brings up a topic not often talked about in most poetry. A relationship doomed ...
Oct 13
