Die or smile?

Who needs people? There have been times in my life where I've met sick people. or have heard of sick people. Where they hurt you, use words to beat you down, and make you feel like you have no worth. "The world is 50% made up of terrible people" (a poor metric I quoted for dramatic effect). What really hits home in your poem is that it's about people. and how sick and evil one can be to another. and how much that hurts personally

I feel that when it comes to people. We should try our hardest to be as kind as possible. But it's hard to think like that when there are people who criticise, berate, and hurt you. No matter how much love you can offer it can never be enough.

Or should I die with a smile?

This poem brought tears to my eyes wow. This is incredible and I can completely relate to this. Firstly let me say that the formatting of the poem is so good, repeating "do i need to die or smile" is so powerful. I feel like most people can actually relate to this because everyone has been bullied or gotten told how terrible they were.

Just remember you are important in your own way and amazing in you're own way :>
Keep writing amazing pieces

i actually really like how this poem shows someone struggling with the way other people treat them and how it feels like theyre stuck between being hurt and pretending everything is okay. the repeated question of whether they should die or smile is honestly really powerful because it makes you think about how someone can be in so much pain but still feel like they have to hide it from everyone else. i also like how the poem repeats similar lines in each part because it shows that its not just one thing hurting the person but lots of different things building up until they dont even know what theyre supposed to do anymore

the way the writer uses words like useless and not important really makes the poem feel personal because those are the kinds of things that could stay in someones head for a long time even after the person who said them has forgotten about it. i think the line about someone stabbing their heart with their sharp words is also really effective because it compares emotional pain to physical pain and shows how much words can actually affect someone. sometimes people act like words arent a big deal but they can genuinely hurt someone more than people realise

i also think the ending is really interesting because asking if they should die with a smile makes the poem feel even more heartbreaking and leaves the reader thinking about what the person is going through. the contrast between dying and smiling is what makes the whole poem stand out to me because smiling is usually seen as something happy but here it feels more like hiding pain or trying to make everyone else think youre fine when youre really not

overall i think this poem does a good job of showing how exhausting it can be when someone feels judged or unwanted by everyone around them and how being treated badly can make someone question their own worth. i think the message is important because nobody should have to feel like they need to pretend theyre okay just to make other people comfortable and people should be more careful with how they treat others because you never really know what someone is dealing with

From you poem, I can relate the feeling when I am hurt by someone's words or actions deeply but cannot say a single word or express how I feel. How I have to choose to simply ignore and move on for the sake of not dragging the situation but the scar stays, the feeling of hurt never go away fully. I like your poem.

This is so understandable