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Heyy! I really liked how dreamy and mysterious this felt. It honestly reads like something you have to sit with for a while because the meaning isn’t immediately obvious. The ...

This one has a really beautiful metaphor, especially how the whole relationship is shown through stars and astronomy. I really liked the idea of the narrator being an “astronomer” who ...

Heyy!! I really enjoyed this! It started off feeling so normal with Itsuki and Iroha just talking about school, snacks, studying, and the new convenience store, which honestly made the ...

Heyy!! I really loved this!! The whole idea of Entropy throwing a party where everything is slowly falling apart is honestly such a creative way to write about something that ...

This actually made me stop and think for a while. I really liked the idea behind it, especially the thought that by the time we notice a moment, it's already ...

Hello am moon! I really enjoyed reading this!! The whole poem has such a dark, tense feeling to it, and I liked how you slowly showed us what the speaker ...

Hi rithika. Am moon! I really liked this! It feels like the poem is about realizing that someone you trusted wasn't actually who you thought they were. I especially liked ...

Hey Dom!! I finally got around to reading all three chapters 😭 and wow, these were painful. In the best way obviously lol. Chapter 11 started off so wholesome with ...

hello! Am moon! really liked this one! It has such a strong feeling of someone being told how they’re supposed to live, but choosing love instead. The “perfect little dove” ...

Heyy! I really liked this, especially the whole idea of “fiction” and “non-fiction” being the version of ourselves we show people vs who we actually are inside. The repeated “who ...

Heyy! Am moon. I really liked this poem! The chameleon metaphor works so well for someone who hides their true feelings and changes themselves to fit in with everyone around ...

Heyy! I really enjoyed reading this!

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Hey! I really enjoyed reading this, especially because it feels more like something meant to be performed than simply read on a page. You can really hear the frustration and ...

Hey! Am moon! I really enjoyed reading this. I love how the whole poem keeps returning to the word “what,” because it gives it this questioning, almost restless feeling. The ...

Hey! I really liked this piece. The comparison between ignoring grief and wearing thick gloves while touching ice is such a simple but effective metaphor. You can know that something ...