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Re: Some kind of monster land: Stranger than creatures
Hi Banana Lover, i readed this story and i thinked it is very much interesting but also a little bit confusing for me because the parents are demonic clown and ...
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Re: The Moon Prince
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Oct 20
Hello Banana lover, I really liked this story and it kept me readingg the whole time. The begining was a bit slow but the way Orion looks at the lake ... -
Re: TIRED OF THE WORLD
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Oct 19
this poem is honestly so deep and full of raw emotion like you can really feel the pain and how tired the writer is of all the bad things in ... -
Re: time
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Oct 19
This story about the village of Bellweather is so beautiful and unique because it show a placed where time dont exist like for us. like I really love how the ... -
Re: Review Day!
Practice makes perfect, wise ones say. yes I am aiming high, past the sky; good And reviews come so easily, Not true I'll write about what gives me glee; you ...
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Re: My planet: a leaf
dis poem is bout a person who think dere planet is a smol leaf. dey feel like de leaf is both very tiny but also super huge at same time. ...
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Re: AJ Isn't Allowed To Use A Microphone: Their Essay On AI And Its Impacts
Nice points mentioned about AI usage - over sexualization etc. are mentioned neatly. Human touch is always the best. Let me tell you my perspective, my friend. We have only ...
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Re: Demon
Ok ,rikki here for a brief review for your poem. The structure of the poem looks good and quite easy to follow as well. Well written in the form of ...
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Re: i-m-p-o-s-s-i-b-l-e
Ok ,rikki here for a small review of your short and sweet composition. This looks like as if you along with one of your affectionate one wishes to escape to ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: A Ripple Effect
Ok ,rikki here for a small review. I hope Josh is someone you love and most affectionate to you. Coming back initially I thought it to something about Ripples only ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Conform
Hi , rikki for a short review of your poetic piece. This is quite a long composition and throws light on conformity to standard rules and regulations laid out by ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Strength
This is inspiring to say the least. Though not very rhythmic but flows well. These are some of the well written lines " I am stronger Than your hands on ...
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Re: Black Hearts
It seems as if you are hurt emotionally and expressing dislike for any trickster. The flow of the theme is good, in fact nice. Believe me I like poems on ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Wastelands: After The Flash (An introduction for an upcoming book)
Hi @EmeraldLinks Nice and decent looking portray of something viably interesting to come ahead. I assume you are a very yyoung writer and have something interesting to share. But it ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: I can't stop it
Ok, rikki here for a brief review. This poem is short,small and sweet. This could be read painlessly without any jargon within five minutes or less. Is this poem written ...
Mar 28, 2014
