Before you came, the room was just a room,
A quiet shape of shadow and of silent gloom.
Then you walked in, and turned the heavy world around,
And taught my racing heart a soft and steady sound.
I look at you and wonder how the stars align,
To let a soul as gentle as your own be mine.
Not for the grandest promises that we could make,
Just for the simple truth of you, for goodness' sake.
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