I love you when your mind is light and clear,
But more so when the shadows draw too near.
When you are tired, worn, and out of praise,
And feeling lost inside the modern maze.
I do not need the version that is strong,
The one who always knows where they belong.
Give me the broken pieces of your day;
I’ll hold them close until they fade away
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AHH OMG okay I have to say at this point I looooove your poems, I am also a hopeless romantic who cannot hide when I am in love I Just want to scream it out and write love poems and talk about it all the time and I Just love the way you write so much. I love your words and your rhymes and the pure love inside them, I can feel it from all the way over here and I do not think I live anywhere near you hahaha
You probably hear it all the time but yes I Just wanted to say this because I love reading your work, keep it up 🩷🩷🩷