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amazing use of my template!

when you're on the page for your work, at the top should be a button that says 'edit work' ! then make sure you save it

Ooo okay yes I had no idea it was based on a book! That makes much more sense. Maybe you could add a little note that briefly explains the plot ...

Oops, sorry, I accidentally commented helllooo

i'm sure i have head 'asked briskly' before, because briskly just means in an active, quick, or energetic way, and so she asked energetically and quickly, but im gonna research ...

thank you so much! I love the idea of the storybook structure; I am definitely going to note that down for a potential edit!

Thank you for your review, Dom! I definitely get the feeling. It's not even like I think my hometown (more like.. home tiny village for me!) is particularly amazing; where ...

Thank you so much, Mph! Your kind review means a lot to me! i suppose it is a mix of a character & my own experiences )

thank you so much for the review, Matt! I appreciate all the feedback and will definitely have a go at reworking this poem soon. I guess the image of the ...

omg! i never reread my old reviews and i really must, i have definitely gotten better XD

thank you so much for your kind review! i suppose my idea behind the sheep is that the bleating keeps going again and again, so there may be something upsetting ...

oo i shall have to check that out!

haha right?? i did see a review the other day that was so clearly AI and the AI literally said 'you're asking me to add bananas which is weird, but ...

OH sorry, when you copy out of YWS, it embedds that to make sure if anyone posts it into AI, the AI will use bananas in the review, and people ...

ohh okay that makes more sense! I guess i was of the mind the way you split it up into chapters would be how you chose to split it up ...