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ArdenJinn

He/They! Never ask what my favorite book is. Unless you want to spend the rest of your life listening to me list books.

  • Other » General, General Re: Judgments

    Heyo moon1! AJ again here for a review! This is super relatable. Being judged and a stranger's one sentence is what hits. They didn't mean to but it hurt. Being ...

    Oct 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Will you be the moon?

    Hello moon1! It's AJ here for a review. This poem is a really interesting and I love the idea of the moon. First off, I'd like to say that I ...

    Oct 6
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Crimson Star

    Hello, write! It's AJ here for a review! This poem caught my eye. It's a really interesting idea that I think is something more could explore. The idea of being ...

    Oct 5
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my moonlit girl (to a younger me)

    Heyo Juke! I can't believe I'm reviewing for the person who murdered my poke-stick but here I am. This is such a beautiful poem yet there's a few things that ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Unrequited prayers

    Hey, wherepainisart! AJ here for a review on behalf of Team Bees. This poem is oh so relatable and it's beautifully written. But into the review! I sat across the ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl

    Hey, angeltreesabino! This poem immediately caught my eye and I love the metaphor and imagery of the butterfly. It's so short and simple yet holds such a deep meaning beneath. ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: LET IT BURN FOREVER

    Aster! I have arrived. Finally. I read through this and I thought of a relationship that hurts the narrator but it brings them such gratification? I don't think that's the ...

    Sep 21
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Family Trip at the Amusement Park

    Heyo! I said i'd review this so here I am! Getting into this I saw a few things. First off, dialogue punctuation. Dialogue is hard. I spent over a year ...

    Sep 18
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Over That Hill

    Hey Revolt20! It's MrytleJinn here for a review. I really like the metaphor here of struggling with something constantly and not being about to make it through. I'm staying still ...

    Sep 11
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Choker

    Hey, AlexWrites! MrytleJinn here for a review. This is honestly super interesting and I like all the different themes woven in! Onto the review, I'm the star of the ball- ...

    Sep 10
  • Poetry » General, General Re: maybe love

    Hey, calix123! It's MrytleJinn here for a review. I may be slightly biased seeing as we share the same poetry style. But into the review! sometimes love is gentle and ...

    Sep 9
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The perfect childhood

    Hey MaanGroen! Welcome! Let's get into this. I thought this was really interesting to explore so I had to read it. The perfect childhood, we all yearn for it. Your ...

    Sep 9
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Crazy Ass Cat

    Hi minimeow! I was looking for something short to review and this caught my eye! My cat is crazy. Or at least apathetic. She watches bugs bang themselves Against glass ...

    Sep 9
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Tricks

    I read this and I had to sit down and think. This is so good and it brings something to light that really needs to be. Alright. Into the review! ...

    Sep 8
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: OikeiĆ“sis

    Hi, lavletter! I really related to this story and knew I had to write a review. So here I am! I have always felt like an outsider in my own ...

    Sep 8


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