ArdenJinn

Okay so I went and reread the Code. 1. Yes, there's a stray bracket. I'll fix that. 2. I'm kicking myself for using the word kin. Its supposed to be ...

I really like that idea actually, about spacing out the code. Yeah. I wrote the code late one night and never really looked back over it.... Thanks for the ideas!

Hello!

Thank you! At the end of the whole story I'll bring back the Warrior's Code and it'll mean a lot more by the end.

Hi XxGhostfirexX. YUUKI. What did I say about stalking?

Thanks Tikaa!! That's all super helpful. This made complete sense in my head so it's really nice to get an outside perspective. And no, it's not Eragon sadly. I do ...

*nervously laughs* I got a little sleep last night! I was finishing a drawing. It's on my wall. You should check it out...

Yay!!!! I'm so glad it's in the spotlight! It deserves it!

I really like it! Honestly, most of my poems are a ramble.

This reminds me a lot of my poem, Pink Hair and Green Eyes. Nice!! Did you take inspiration or not?

You can definitely call me AJ. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the feedback! All these things Ive been working on fixing but haven't quite been able to figure out. The tense slips should be fixed now

I realized that a lot of people probably dont know what some of these things are. Show drill: how the people in a marching band move around. Our instructions essentially. ...

Thanks? I just put the rating due to language

It's one of my worst nightmares too. I'm so happy to read this! This is one of my favorite poems to read