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  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: The Anatomy of a Sneeze

    ? I really don't know about the points system though 🥶

    Oct 19
  • Poetry » Nature, Lyrical Re: My planet: a leaf

    I appreciate your feedback, Rae. Thank you for reading 🔅

    Oct 19
  • Poetry » Nature, Lyrical Re: My planet: a leaf

    This is the point of view though: A leaf has a lot of texture that looks like division on its surface. And zooming into it we can think about the ...

    Oct 19
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Aphasia

    Thank you, I'm very glad that you liked it ^⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠⁠_⁠^ It is about unspoken thoughts. As the two characters Haini and Star meets, the stanzas are their internal monologues which ...

    Oct 18
  • Poetry » Health, Other Re: 𝘛𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 thoughts again.

    (⁠◠⁠‿⁠・⁠)⁠—⁠☆

    Oct 17
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Dearest you, through me

    Thank yuu!

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: The fault is mine

    Yeaa? That's great. Tell her when you're ready! Let me know too, if you don't mind.

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Dearest you, through me

    Thank you so much so the review. Well it's actually an imaginary presence whom I said to be my poetry.

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Dearest you, through me

    I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you ☀

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Under One Life

    Thank you so much for your detailed and honest review¡ Now when I look at it, I should have made it more clear. I wasn't thinking of the structure while ...

    Oct 15
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Tell You How You Made You

    Thank you very much for the feedback! It's on how a person's made.

    Oct 10
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The High Blocks

    Thank you so much for reading and for such a thoughtful review! I'm so glad you enjoyed Maisepe's journey among the stars and picked up on the themes of wonder ...

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Te-re-re

    Thank you very much for your feedback! The poem is actually about how people observe the world—how quiet they become when looking at something or listening closely. I wanted to ...

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Te-re-re

    Thank you very much for the feedback! ⛧

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Under One Life

    Thank you so much moon ☁

    Oct 5


The fellow who thinks he knows it all is especially annoying to those of us who do.
— Harold Coffin