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Re: The Anatomy of a Sneeze
? I really don't know about the points system though 🥶
Oct 19 -
Re: My planet: a leaf
I appreciate your feedback, Rae. Thank you for reading 🔅
Oct 19 -
Re: My planet: a leaf
This is the point of view though: A leaf has a lot of texture that looks like division on its surface. And zooming into it we can think about the ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Aphasia
Thank you, I'm very glad that you liked it ^_^ It is about unspoken thoughts. As the two characters Haini and Star meets, the stanzas are their internal monologues which ...
Oct 18 -
Re: 𝘛𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 thoughts again.
(◠‿・)—☆
Oct 17 -
Re: Dearest you, through me
Thank yuu!
Oct 16 -
Re: The fault is mine
Yeaa? That's great. Tell her when you're ready! Let me know too, if you don't mind.
Oct 16 -
Re: Dearest you, through me
Thank you so much so the review. Well it's actually an imaginary presence whom I said to be my poetry.
Oct 16 -
Re: Dearest you, through me
I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you ☀
Oct 16 -
Re: Under One Life
Thank you so much for your detailed and honest review¡ Now when I look at it, I should have made it more clear. I wasn't thinking of the structure while ...
Oct 15 -
Re: Tell You How You Made You
Thank you very much for the feedback! It's on how a person's made.
Oct 10 -
Re: The High Blocks
Thank you so much for reading and for such a thoughtful review! I'm so glad you enjoyed Maisepe's journey among the stars and picked up on the themes of wonder ...
Oct 10 -
Re: Te-re-re
Thank you very much for your feedback! The poem is actually about how people observe the world—how quiet they become when looking at something or listening closely. I wanted to ...
Oct 10 -
Re: Te-re-re
Thank you very much for the feedback! ⛧
Oct 10 -
Re: Under One Life
Thank you so much moon ☁
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