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hey ellie! In the previous poem, I analysed it as the speaker only exhaling, pleading, with no inhale. This poem is somewhat of an answer: the inhale arrives, but not ...

Hi Ellie! I'm back to review another poem in your brilliant collection! This one really read to me like a prayer, not a decorative one. The structure is essentially devotional: ...

Hey Alex, I'm back again for the next song! I've got to say, I love that the moon imagery continues here! 'You've got the pull of a moon babe' however ...

Hi Ellie! I realised the previous poem I reviewed was a part of your NaPoWeek collection, so I thought I'd head back to the beginning! I'll start with my overall ...

Hi Ellie! I have been meaning to review one of your poems for ages now, and I can't believe this piece has no reviews! The format absolutely drew me in ...

Hi Hira, I was scouring the green room for something to review and stumbled across this :) I like the idea behind this. I have this personal theory (it probably ...

Hello!! Apologies it has taken me so long to get to this chapter. Life is so tiring at the moment. Hope you are doing well! I'll jump right into it. ...

Hey Alex! I've been meaning to get around to reviewing this since you posted your collection! I love the singing version; it's honestly amazing, and I love the way you ...

I love the atmosphere you've built up in the piece! And the dialogue seems natural and realistic. I do wish we learnt their names, as repeating 'the brunette' got tiring ...

wow, I can't believe this doesn't have any reviews yet! I thought this was a brilliant piece. living with two guns strapped to my back. facing both inwards and outwards. ...

Hi! This reads more like a diary entry or maybe just a spoken confession than a poem, but that is both a strength and a very slight weakness. Usually it’s ...

aaa another chapter! i'm so excited! Beau picked up whistling a tune as he rode. Beau liked to whistle, though he never whistled the same tune twice, nor did he ...

Everyone thinks paper and ink are beautiful, but somehow everyone forgets that hands are the ones that do that magic. 'hands are what do the magic' makes more sense, as ...

Hello, I'm going through old green room works and came across this one :) The language is very nice and flowery here, and I appreciate the emotion behind this piece, ...

Hello! Well, this is very clearly an advert for your company or the company you work at, which you have cleverly disguised as a short story. I'm not totally sure ...