Therwormwriter

Hello! Overall this is a good poem, and as someone who is gender ??? and have went through moments where I have though myself to be gender-fluid, I think you ...

Then I saw him. Stopping at the light beside our van. Staring in front of him, not having a clue. Most likely thinking to himself about his day, plans, etc. ...

First off, If you have not watched 'the history of the entire world I guess' on YouTube you should, this poem reminds me of the beginning of it. Typically I ...

I really love that this is giving more meaning but changing nothing. This poem frames nothingness and hangs it on the wall. This poem is generally very beautiful, and a ...

I love this poem! Particularly the complex language use adds a lot to it. For what is speed but panic made kinetic, what haste but terror wearing gilded shoes? The ...

This is a very cute and kind of sad thing, they get to play and such, but due to the nature of fire and wind, well, The candle kissed the ...

I love the extended metaphor of the forge and weapons! Extended metaphors can be difficult to do well, and I think you did quite decently. I love the way that ...

I feel as though this poem can be a statement on being so high on the ladder you can no longer see your initial goals any more. There is no ...

As someone who grew up in religion, this is so incredible. This poem makes me want to post more poems about religion, the way that violence in this poem always ...

I will be honest in not truly understanding the first line, but i can speak some on the rest. Thinking about it it could truly be so many different things, ...

I generally am not the romantic type of person, nor do I particularly enjoy reading about romance. This poem shows much more than romance, it shows a purer love. The ...

This is a quite relatable poem to me, the world feels so tiny and huge and like its so much more. I love the view of leaves as the fractaling ...

This sort of feels like the experience of locking your knees, unswaying and plopping. It also makes me think of marching band. People are made for movement, in a multitude ...

This is a very cute poem! I enjoy the use of slant rhymes( I hope that's what they are called). I find this a very chill poem and down to ...

This is a very detailed poem, and I very much so appreciate the detail that goes into this poem. It also is humorous, something I find the poetry community (me, ...