Please critique this, as harshly as you wish. Most of the plot is completed and any plot holes that you may find aren’t necessarily plot holes, I was simply unable to find a good way to explain them. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them, and I’d be happy to answer. This writing may seem difficult to read, and it is meant to be that way, though I am trying to improve on readability.
Prepare to ruin your first impression with my awful prologue ^^
Set across England and Wales, Crawlers details the lives of children now adults have been infected with a parasitical virus which turns them into flesh-hungry alien zombies
TW: Gore - Drugs - Violence - Mention of past sexual encounters - Blood - medication .............................. This book represent's the life of the people who struggle to live, it is a point of view many people can't handle seeing, and if your not ready do NOT read this, this novel is about a very unhealthy mental state in the view of THE people
