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Re: The Quiet Path
Hey there! I'm Jaye! Living in music was a lot easier than in the real world. This was a nice beginning! Sometimes it does make it easier, but I feel ...
Oct 24 -
Re: He is really romantic, isn't he?
Awww. This was so cute. I really didn't think that this was a dream. I was hoping that it was real. π I didn't see anything wrong with the story. ...
Oct 24 -
Re: Will you?
Darling, tell me, will you love me if I stop looking at the sky? Perfect way to start a poem. Perfection. This whole piece is perfect. If so, then take ...
Oct 20 -
Re: Am i dead?
That morning, my reflection called me useless. The first thing to read. . . besides the "Am I dead?" But this quote was heartfelt. Because is the reflection calling you ...
Oct 20 -
Re: ππ©π°π΄π¦ thoughts again.
Thoughts. . . Sometimes I have these weird thoughts in my head, even when I try get them to leave. My curiosity is growing. . . I think all of ...
Oct 20 -
Re: Tricking myself.
Hey there! I'm Jaye! The titles of your poetry spoke to me so here I am about to read & review them! You tried to trick yourself into believing that ...
Oct 20 -
Re: Friendships Fade, Memories Don't
Hey there! I'm Jaye! You sat at our crowded dinner table every Friday night Laughed under the covers with me after dark We were inseparable from the very start I ...
Oct 20 -
Re: THE ART OF HER
Hey there! I'm Jaye! In the darkest hour of the night, I saw a star shining so bright Tears began to drop and fall As I recalled your eyes out ...
Oct 20 -
Re: Can someone save me?
Dang moon. This hurt me. I'm not even thinking that this is just for poetry. These are your thoughts and that alone haunts me. I want to die, please kill ...
Oct 20 -
Re: My beautiful memories
Woah. This was beautiful. I almost started to tear up.... Just wow. This hit me. Really really deeply. It spoke to me. I can feel the emotion and the words ...
Oct 18 -
Re: And It Will Never Be
Hey there! I've had this bookshelfed for a while, trying to find a time to read through it. And today I finally did! lollll Anyways, back to context. This was ...
Oct 18 -
Re: I love you..
Dang. This was a little dark, lollll. I mean, I guess it's real in a way. But dang. π I don't know why I loved this. Usually i'm not the ...
Oct 13 -
Re: I miss you
Aww. (I'll probably be stalking all of your work π€π€) My eyes blur, my heart cries like a sky without its clouds. I loved how real this is. Just the ...
Oct 13 -
Re: A little romance in my bedroom
Awwwww. I loved this so much. This was so cute and I could picture everything. I didn't see anything that needed touch-ups. It was all perfect to me. When I ...
Oct 12 -
Re: Time comes, Unexpectedly
This was a nice story. It was a little fast paced, but I think that it was supposed to be, since it was a short story. . . ? There ...
Oct 12
