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  • The Grampians

    A K of bushland Blackened by fire New growth bloom where the old growth fall The Kangaroo tails A wonder of the bush Take years to grow a metre tall ...

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  • The Dream

    The night was a pleasant one, warm with a gentle cooling breeze in the air. The stars shone like fairy lights, brighter than anything among the night sky, black as ...

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  • Lies
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  • draft of prologue CRITIQUES NEEDED!!

    Prologue Skye Jeffory had to sit in the Melbrooke Mental Hospital waiting room for what could easily seem like an hour but, based on the constant glances up at the ...

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  • the platypus

    Don't ask me why I wrote this. I just want a platypus. He glides through the water with all the elegance of a swan in flight. The water ripples along ...

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  • Alagore chapter one

    something I've been playing with over the last... 3 years if my maths is correct. Tell me what you think OneAs he inhaled the bitter-sweet air only smelt while sailing ...

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  • Writer's block unblocker

    this is half fiction, half true so i don't know where to post it. I only wrote this because i was trying to unblock my writers block and it sort ...

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  • No title yet. something I'll think of later-draft chaptr 1

    I just got this weird feeling that I wanted to write something with ghosts in it, lol, so this is chapter one of the thing i wrote. please! all critiques ...

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  • First Day As A Widow

    This was a task my Creative Writing class had to do. The topic was "First Day", and mine was the most impressive, apparently. I think the rest just wrote about ...

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  • dont read this! its my business

    dont bother reading this. i had to post it so i could access it at my mums heap of poop computer, and my email isnt working. Hi Lucy, Thanks for ...

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  • "Double Dad" prologue

    Adam suggested the whole dream sequence, but I'm a bit iffy about it. Here it is, and PLEASE be as harsh as you want. I want to go somewhere with ...

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  • Oh, Corrie 1

    ONE It had never rained like this before. As I stared out the window, I was starting to wonder if Mother Nature was mourning the death of my sister. It ...

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  • "Double Dad" Chapter 2

    I'm not too sure about this chapter, it seems a bit weak to me. Tell me what you think CHAPTER 2 RICK'S GIRL "Damn this rain. I can't see a ...

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  • "Double Dad" chapter 3

    Ive made a decision to make all chapters that aren't from Corrie short. CLAUDETTE'S NIECE I laid out an extra dish for Corrie, in case she decided to show up ...

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  • "Double Dad" chapter 4

    XD heaps of people have told me they want to know who's at the door, its so funny. THE SUSPENSE MUST BE KILLING YOU! Truth be told its not a ...

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  • "Double Dad"--- chapter 5

    Watch out for the bad word CLAUDETTE'S NIECE "I thought you said she was in here." Rick's latest girlfriend stood in the doorway to the spare room. My gaze was ...

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  • "Double Dad"--- Chapter 6

    An even shorter chapter XD CHAPTER 6 THE NOTE I'm sorry for running away, but it's something I had to do. I can't be in Melbourne, I can't go to ...

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  • "Double Dad" Chapter 7

    The much anticipated long chapter, but I think it's a bit iffy. CORRIES DIARY Corrie's Diary I had to get away. They won't understand. It's just something I had to ...

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  • "Double Dad" Chapters 8 and 9

    Kiss my tears goodnight (nee double dad) has FINALLY been posted 2 chapters at a time. Yay! Cos every-one's been whinging about it, lol. The originals of these chapters were ...

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  • "Double Dad" chapter 10

    I'm not too fond of this chapter, but other people think its ok. So I need some other opinions. Thanks CHAPTER 10 ANDREWS HITCH HIKER She was silent for ages. ...

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  • Posthumous (nee KMTG, nee Double Dad) chapter 11

    I think I subconsciously wrote this chapter. Spooky. Well, the street part was me writing, then I just zoned out with the pen in my hand and when I came ...

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  • Posthumous Chapter 12

    CHAPTER 14 CORRIES DIARY I didn't stop to watch Andrew's Ute roll away into the night. Instead I turned my back and raced down the driveway to apartment number 4. ...

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  • First Kiss (Part 1?)

    ha-ha. I randomly wrote this. Inspired by the lovely weather and the song I was listening to. Love to know how dodgy it is... Part 1 They lay sprawled out ...

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  • Russell

    Please, don't ask me why I wrote this.All I know is that I had Matt and Sarah Halliday in mind while I typed.Enjoy.(First draft, might I add) From the corner ...

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  • Falling From Grace

    Falling From Graceby Jane Godwin Kip. Annie. Grace. David. Ted.Five different people.One terrible night. Falling from Grace, on a scale from 0 to 100 on the "supardooparawesomness" scale would be ...

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  • "Double Dad" chapter 11

    Well, I wrote this late last night, and haven't really re-written, but due to the popular demand I have decided to start "DD" (for lack of a better name) up ...

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  • "Double Dad" Prologue - chapter 10

    Prologue CORRIE'S DREAM A loud banging noise echoed through my head. It woke me up with a start. My eyes jolted open and the first thing I noticed was that ...

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  • Abandoned DD12
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  • Possibilities. - One

    I know I promised myself to start a romantic/dramatic fiction story (other than DD) NEXT year, but I was just browsing through YWS forums when inspiration hit me like a ...

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  • "Double Dad" Chapter 12 Draft.

    This is a draft, and I expect there to be a million and one problems with it, so feel free... Chapter 12 Kitty's (to be filled in at a later ...

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  • The Rust Of Life

    "Anxiety is the rust of life, destroying its brightness and weakening its power." -Anon. January 2, 2008. It is a Wednesday, and a very hot one at that. I am ...

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  • The Process.

    English homework. The Process. Fluid surrounded my pale body, filling my lungs as I struggled for breath. Around me, the rest of my class groaned and begged in gargles and ...

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  • John.

    English Homework. John. A draft wafted through the hall, offering the illusion that the house was empty. John knew better. Small, salty drops rolled carelessly down his red cheeks. His ...

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  • Adam and Elle.

    I have no idea what inspired me to write this, but I have. I think it is a bit icky, especially towards the end, but that's your opinion in the ...

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  • Russell's improvement.

    Since the first version was crap... From the corner of my eye, I was watching him. His sneakers were pounding into the asphalt path. Sweat was sliding down his chocolate ...

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  • Oh Corrie (2)

    Double Dad fans, Corrie is getting a make over. This is told through Claudette's point of view and is a follow up of chapter one.ALL critiques welcome. TWO A small ...

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  • Oh Corrie (3)

    This is a bit of a kooky chapter. Please, feel free to tell me what you think. And for those of you who haven't read the first two chapters, or ...

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  • Oh Corrie (4)

    FOUR Corrie came home at about six in the evening. She had been gone for several hours into the vast black hole of what was once known as the town. ...

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  • To Whisper Your Name

    Edited! Prologue. The sky was dark, lined heavily with thick, black clouds that cried out thin, cold droplets. The world below became victimised by the downpour. A flame of auburn ...

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  • Sparrows

    Sparrows. The leaves on the branch twitched with life. A small bird, no bigger than a pocket-watch, had perched there, his claws wrapped tightly around the coarse bark. His two, ...

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  • Burning with more than Revenge

    Consider this my YWS comeback ^^It is based on the series Tomorrow When The War Began's book Burning with Revenge. This is what I imagine happened while Ellie was catching ...

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  • Coffee and Breathmints

    Dear Lucy, I've forgotten. I've forgotten what hunger feels like. There are pains, aren't there? Do they stab, like a knife thrust repeatedly into the stomach? Or do they ache, ...

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  • Love Letter

    *Deleted by Author's Request*

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  • Kids in the playground

    Kids of the Playground: A scream, a squeal, a giggle; all noises that radiate from the Hungry Jacks playground. A family of children climb and crawl over the equipment – ...

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  • Bailey, one.

    ONE The classroom smelt differently. The slight tang of Old Spice and the dull musk of a mothballed sweater were gone. A once intoxicating cocktail of scent that Bailey has ...

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Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg