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Interesting.
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She, herself, was one, and never knew her real father
This is confusing. Is she a celebrity love child, or just a love child? Also, it makes your story seem a bit obvious.
Overall, very interesting. People do stupid things, and this is a good example. The only thing is that we need more details about the situation- what is Kitty thinking through all this? Why does she want to share this with her friend so much?
If you need/want/whatever anything, feel free to PM me ;D:D:D:D:D:D:D