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Re: Am i dead?
Hi! I will be reviewing this for you today! I really enjoyed reading this thank you for the opportunity! Lets start form the beginning... That morning, my reflection called me ...
Oct 21 -
Re: Addiction and Psychosis
Hello! I will be reviewing this for today, great job on your writing! I encourage you to continue doing so in the future! I think when reading this we should ...
Oct 19 -
Re: THE ART OF HER
In the darkest hour of the night, I saw a star shining so bright Tears began to drop and fall As I recalled your eyes out shining all. I think ...
Oct 19 -
Re: You Lost Me
I will be reviewing this today! so good luck, it seems like a good read and just brushing over it, it seems as though you may have used 3 instead ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Angels and Devils
I love the imagery you used, but you also muddled the idea here You're an angel and a devil in my head Kind one minute then the next wishing me ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Dear Dissociation
I love how this is much like a hybrid between a poem and a letter, extra points for creativity! I also love the rhyming scheme you did by using every ...
Oct 15 -
Re: Love is like a leaf
This is beautiful, I teared up a little while reading it. I love how it portrays love as the need for patience and not as something that can be had ...
Oct 14 -
Re: Drip
This is definitely something some people go through and sadly is a regular part of our world, I'd like to start with the line Drip, drip, drip. The blood flowing ...
Oct 14 -
Re: I would die for you..
Beautiful piece, shows what love truly is, and I truly think it is pretty good. If I had to be in a dark room to have you, I would happily ...
Oct 9 -
Re: My Everything
This is a beautiful example of love and emotion all wrapped up in some of the most beautiful packaging: lyrics. What you did here is so important to recognize, that ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Death
Reading this is something that I feel a lot of people understand and those who don't probably have not gone through many hardships in life that hurt them so much ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Time To Prove The System Wrong
Honestly loved this, it was hilarious to read and something that I absolutely loved seeing on here. Congrats on breaking the system! (Now to see if I can actually earn ...
Oct 7 -
Re: The World, Briefly
I would love to start off by saying that you did a very good job showing how the world really is, how not everything leaves fast but sometimes so slowly ...
Oct 6 -
Re: Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 4 Watch Your Back
Honestly this is a very interesting piece. I love that for the information you gave in this chapter that it was easy to follow and without any of the details ...
Oct 6 -
Re: Am lonely..
Reading this feels real, the pain and truth to it is there weather people want to accept it or not. Your right, the moon isn't lonely, but people who are ...
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