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Re: There's Nothing I Could Have Done
*sniff, sniff, I'm still mourning over bug too* I know I only joined last month, but Bug has been an extremely wonderful person to me, so I will miss her, ...
Oct 4 -
Re: Light
Hi Hira, Queenie here with a review! First, I love this poem. It is so beautiful, and I absolutely love the language that you used in this poem. You should ...
Oct 2 -
Re: The Rebirth Quartet (yes ik it's corny, gimme a break)
Hi Dom, Q here to review your work as promised!😊 Let me break it down because there is quite a lot here. First poem: Praise: It was incredibly beautiful, and ...
Sep 27 -
Re: The Nomad
Hey there, It's Queenie with a review! I liked this a lot; it is really short, but it expresses a lot. I am wondering if it is part of a ...
Sep 27 -
Re: Rest Here
Wow, this is beautiful! Since you are relatively new to this place, I wanted to introduce myself, You can call me Queenie and I am kind of new as well ...
Sep 26 -
Re: Adolescence
Hello there! Queenie here with a review. I loved this poem; it is very short, but you captured adolescence with creative language. Let me see. A small child dies inside ...
Sep 26 -
Re: The Girl
Hello there! Queenie here! This poem is so beautiful and simple at the same time! Let me see, She never asks for the dreams, She only asks for one wish ...
Sep 26 -
Re: I Miss You, I Do
Queenie here for a review! This reminds me so much of my friendship breakup that happened recently. I felt the same things that are explained in this poem. I still ...
Sep 24 -
Re: .
Hello there. Queenie here with a review. At first glance, this poem is absolutely beautiful. I am really sorry that you feel like this, because you seem like a nice ...
Sep 21 -
Re: Splatters
Hello there , Queenie here with a review. I really enjoyed this poem. I could relate to this a lot. Hmm, let's see I want to write a poem And ...
Sep 20 -
Re: Just Like I Am
Hello, AJ ( if I can call you that! ) again. Queenie here with a review!!! At first glance, this is a beautiful short poem that beautifully explains who you ...
Sep 19 -
Re: Our Clumsy Sunshine
First of all, great poem about a little clumsy cutie!!! I wonder who this is about? I really loved these parts: She drops things and stumbles, Forgets the dance routine; ...
Sep 17 -
Re: My Love My Door
Hi WELCOME TO YWS!!!! I loved this poem a lot, so let me share my observations..... I wanted warmth. I wanted arms. Yeah, personally, I can deeply relate to this ...
Sep 16 -
Re: Unrequited prayers
Hello there . First of all , WELCOME TO YWS!!!! Second, this poem is very relatable, I loved it, so let me see I liked you not very little but ...
Sep 16 -
Re: It really hurts
Hello there! This is a sweet short little poem that conveys lots of feelings, so let me see. They don't understand - They won't understand How it hurts me As ...
Sep 16
