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Re: The Cartographer of Tomorrow
Hey Hira!!♡ Why are ur metaphors always making me question existence? The idea of Tomorrow employing a mapmaker to chart itself is already such a great one, but then you ...
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Re: Doubt, Who Kept a Lighthouse
Hey Hira!!♡ I love how u used the idea of Doubt as a beacon of hope. i love how u turned something that would typically be seen as hindrance and ...
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Re: The Last Argument Between Two Numbers
Hey Hira!!♡ GIRL, YOU MADE ZERO AND ONE HAVE AN EXISTENTIAL CRISIS AND I'M HERE FOR IT. i love how u managed to take the most basic elements of the ...
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Re: A Letter Returned by Time
Hey Hira!! how do your poems always manage to get me thinking about stuff I wouldn't have otherwise thought about today? I really love the idea of writing a letter ...
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Re: Museum of Becoming
Hey Hira!!♡ I absolutely LOVED the idea of this piece. The idea of walking through a museum of self with rooms dedicated to who u were and who u could ...
Oct 24 -
Re: My Shadow Has Been Learning My Handwriting
Hey Hira!!♡ GIRL, it's SO GOOD i went in for a shadowed poem and stumbled upon a letter from my deepest desires! I actually loved these lines: I think some ...
Oct 23 -
Re: The Moment That Never Was
heyy,Hira!!♡ GIRL, WHY DOES UR BRAIN COMES UP WITH THE IDEAS Such a fascinating idea because we consider the present as something that is real but u made it seem ...
Oct 23 -
Re: The Thought Before the Thought
hey hira!!♡ I just read ur beautiful work and WHY are u making me question my own brainn.... i really like the idea of this, we always assume that we ...
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Re: The Road We Were Always Walking
Okay hira, this got me thinking O_O I love the way u've taken a concept that we rarely question, that we choose our path and it determines our future, and ...
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Re: Sinner
Hey, Maddox!! I have read ur beautiful work and i personally found the poem Sinner presented a soul chilling exploration of guilt, Christian imagery, and the way cruelty is masked ...
Oct 21 -
Re: Bee Poems
Hey, Writer!! I've read ur lovely work and personally i found both poems to be so sweet little journeys into Bee's everyday adventures. They're so sweet..... to read about how ...
Oct 21 -
Re: a fictional account of my death
Hey, cyan!! I've read ur beautiful work and personally, i found it to be quite a journey into the depths of vulnerability and unrequited feelings. The very act of giving ...
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Re: Everything in my dreams is me
Heyy Ellie!!♡ i have read ur beautiful work and i can say that what u have written is very interesting to me. Ur reflection on recurring nightmares is both thrilling ...
Oct 20 -
Re: My precious spring
Hey moon!!♡ i just read ur beautiful work and i really love how u have used the seasons to portray ur pining. Comparing a person to the idea of spring..... ...
Oct 19 -
Re: his tortured poetry
Hey, willie!!♡ I've read ur beautiful work and i loved the journey into the self and the search for some kind of understanding i think this poem is a realy ...
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