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Look Up - Part 2
The smog itself glowed silver, as the moonlight of a full moon bounced off it.
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stuff and things
Recently updated · twos company chapter 1 · Oct 21
29 year old Kime Bell recounts her events the day her friend disappears.
BLOODLINE
Recently updated · BLOODLINE · Oct 21
Title: Bloodline (Book 1)
Genre: YA Psychological Thriller / Mystery (with a Romance Subplot)
The Summary:
Eleven years ago, Virelle Knox’s world literally exploded. After surviving a devastating house bombing, she met a mysterious, glass-scarred woman claiming to be her aunt—only for the woman to vanish into the night, leaving Virelle to find her mother dying beneath a lonely streetlight.
Now twenty-two, Virelle has spent years preparing for answers. Working side-by-side from the very start with Ziggy, her aunt's fierce daughter, the two cousins are on a relentless mission to find Ziggy's missing mother and finally resolve the dark mystery behind Virelle’s mother's death.
But their investigation triggers a trap. Virelle is ambushed and wakes up tied to a chair in a cold concrete room, targeted by the exact same shadowy organization that stole her childhood. Armed with sharp survival instincts, Virelle breaks her bonds and escapes the facility to reunite with Ziggy. Together, they must navigate a maze of family secrets, lethal conspiracies, and a high-security vault known only as the Black File Room.
Along the way, the mission gets complicated when their path crosses with Caelum. Brilliant, elusive, and hiding dangerous secrets of his own, Caelum is pulled into their orbit. As the danger escalates, an intense, slow-burn romance sparks between Virelle and Caelum. Forced to rely on each other in high-stakes situations, Virelle must decide if she can open her heart to someone new—or if Caelum is just another piece of the puzzle designed to destroy her. Because in a game where danger is written in their very DNA, the deadliest traps are the ones hidden inside your own bloodline.
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Look Up (rewrite of p1)
Arfid’s eyelids were heavy, like he’d slept well. He opened them to golden sunlight slanting in through lace curtains. He blinked. Where was he?
Mara’s weird feeling.
a cool kinda creepy story
Sunlight Through Concrete Rain
Recently updated · Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 7 (still WIP but now we're almost there!) · Oct 15
Her eyes glowed iridescent in the light of the ancient holoprojector.
Unsolved Deceptions FINAL VERSIONS
Recently updated · Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 5 Decaying in Waters · Oct 15
This is a fanfic I’ currently working on based on the game Dark Deception by Glowstick Entertainment. So far this is ongoing and been published on Wattpad and I plan to publish the finished chapters here but also post some drafts to get some critique so I can edit them before they are published.
Here’s the plot summary: Doug Houser has died, a truly sad and disappointing end for someone who has made it as far as he did, but Bierce doesn't have time to morn, souls shards still need to be collected and this game still needs to be won. A new soul has taken his place, a detective with a simple wish to bring back his friend from he dead, a death that he would not let stay in vain. But this time it's different, things don't add up, mysteries begin to unfold, and Malak seems to have a new dark trick up his sleeve, something that neither Bierce or this detective are prepared for.
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Not An Average Festival: India's Nine Nights of Divine Drama
“यत्र प्राचीनाः कथाः जीवन्ति, तत्र संस्कृतिः अमराः भवति।” India's Festival Lore Is Actually Insane....
Washing Machine
drain me of any emotion i have left
Unsolved Deceptions DRAFTS
Recently updated · Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 5 Decaying in Waters DRAFT · Oct 7
Unofficial drafts of Unsolved Deceptions meant to be reviewed so I can make edits before publishing the official version.
One Last Breath
The haunting panic, thoughts, and the last breath before you collapse into the midnight . . .
Afraid?
Afraid is a short suspenseful story about Andrew, and if he is ... Afraid?
Shadows in the Rain
A girl haunted by her only true friend who never made it back to her.
The Four
Recently updated · The Four - Chapter 5 · Oct 7
Four children find themselves pulled in a daunting adventure.
The Overnight Convenience Store
Long holiday just finished, ITSUKI and his family just went back after a family visit. But IROHA has been dragging ITSUKI to the convenience store.