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When Loneliness Becomes a Second Skin
A little writing of how sometimes loneliness and sadness just gets the better of someone. Especially after losing a friend very dear to you.
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Myo and Clo
Recently updated · Chapter 2 · Yesterday
A story where everybody dies.
Please critique this, as harshly as you wish. Most of the plot is completed and any plot holes that you may find aren’t necessarily plot holes, I was simply unable to find a good way to explain them. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them, and I’d be happy to answer. This writing may seem difficult to read, and it is meant to be that way, though I am trying to improve on readability.
Prepare to ruin your first impression with my awful prologue ^^
Need opinions for this novel I’m writing for class (wip)
Recently updated · Need opinions for this novel I’m writing for class (wip) · Oct 22
This is a W.I.P! I would like feedback bad please!
Soundings
A short story made with a focus on the feeling and emotion of the character, with a small psychological horror element.
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Green
A short piece about a breakup
Summer is dead to me
This is me practising tying in literary allusions like Lady Macbeth, Medusa and the Sirens. It's about unrequited love.
The Library Admirer
Have you ever had a first look with someone and fell in love?
Dellyween
Happy pre-halloween! (sorry I had to resolve it this way...)
A Glimpse so Strong
Just a glimpse between strangers at the stop light....
time
what if you didnt know about time?
The Quiet Path
wrote after a long time
Shivers up Spines
Recently updated · Shivers up Spines · Oct 16
This is from 7th grade and I've just found it so I'm sharing it
Sheep Dogs
Recently updated · Sheep Dogs (chapter 4) · Oct 16
Gay cowboys
What Can Never Fall
Recently updated · Chapter 6 Lupus Smokeborn: Prophecies and Cookies · Oct 16
TW for abuse, violence, coercive control.In a world where an ancient Warriors Code governs those born with elemental abilities, two prophesied warriors — Keahi Koa, the last surviving dragonkin, and Anwar Junaid, a halfblood Shadow wielder — are supposed to save the continent of Embia from a war that's tearing it apart. But the most dangerous threat isn't the enemy king. It's the dead man living inside their minds.
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Michelangelo & The Angel Dog - Part 1
I write everything and anything - short stories, poetry, travel stories for my Travel Blog - The Nomad Architect - http://www.thenomadarchitect.com/