Jaye

Wow. I felt this in my heart. There's a thousand things I want to tell you Yet none of them I can, not even a few This is so true ...

They think I'm so happy and always smiling, but no one knows that I died from inside and my heart rusted long ago. & No one knows that my soul ...

>They called me selfish, But they don't know what I keep inside. This was by far the realist line for me. I loved this poem so much. It felt so ...

This was interesting. I'm a little confused. The muscles in my arms are straining with the effort and the texture of the dough reminds me of my lover's skin. I ...

Can't breathe, where are her lungs? Is she dying? People around her speaking in tongues This was my favorite piece. This was a nice poem, and it's a great way ...

Wow. This was beautiful. I'm not even sure if I have a favorite quote. The human heart is innocent and pure, not because it has never known pain, but because ...

I do hope that this isn't real . . . The whole title made me interested. And I love poetry, so I was definitely going to read this. But then ...

Hey there! This was an interesting piece. It needs some more work, but that's not such a big deal! There are some grammar errors, but nothing that you can't fix. ...

Hey there! You had commented on one of my stories, so I figured I'd read this, (I also like reading mysteries lolll) The whole scene in general is a nice ...

Hey, there! This is a nice small snippet. It has a nice meaning, it was enjoyable and short. I like how it tells that she originally started out small before ...

Hey there! I figured that I'd read your stories! I'm typically not interested in stories like this just because of personal reasons. But I read it anyway, and I'll say ...

Hey there! The aspect of this story is neat. I like that the girl thinks that if she tells anyone her secrets that they'll judge her. It's real, and that's ...

Hey there! This poem is well thought out for something that's happened after a war. The first few drops fell, then the torrential rain, And the sky wept for those ...

Wow! This is wonderful! I love the rhymes and how you made it flow pretty easily. This is so cute and very true in a way. I Bended To Be ...

Okay, wow. This was beautiful. I loved how you made a dirillusional moon, because that's exactly what love feels like when the person you truly love, loves someone else. It's ...