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moon1

  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Dearest you, through me

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! (GREETING & INTRODUCTION) Top Graham Cracker - What I Know I really like this poem.I think this poem is about ...

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Health, Other Re: π˜›π˜©π˜°π˜΄π˜¦ thoughts again.

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This poem really felt good to me.I think this poem is ...

    Oct 16
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Visions.

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This poem is beautiful.I think this poem is about having a ...

    Oct 15
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bed

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know I was already sad and i read this poem am crying ...

    Oct 15
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: A cup of tea

    Hello!! Am moon Mainly welcome to yws its your first work here and i love this so much. Even my eyes get glossy while reading this. First i like the ...

    Oct 14
  • Poetry » Nature, Narrative Re: They still call her β€œMother” Earth

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This poem is like humans treat earth has mother takes from ...

    Oct 13
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Heart Attack

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is really a beautiful poem. This poem is like a ...

    Oct 13
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonders at a Distance

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! I really loved this poem its so simple and beautiful i connect with this poem!" Top Graham Cracker ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Nature Re: A Tree Falls in the Forest

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! HIIII!! MOON HERE!! AHHH, I'M SO EXCITED TO READ AND REVIEW YOUR WORK!! LET'S GOOOO!! Top Graham Cracker - What ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » General, General Re: There Truly Is No Reason I Shouldn't Be Able To Fly

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know I think its really beautiful poem it says about a speaker ...

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I have begged as much as words allow

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Am moon!! Top Graham Cracker -I think this is about losing someone and not being able to accept it. The ...

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Blank Slate

    Hello!! Am moon. First i really liked your poem its so good. Am really resonated with your poem. And this poem has that painful, melancholy vibe to me and yeah ...

    Oct 9
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: 'My Rib'

    Hello!! Am moon. First am saying you i loved this poem. It has that dark vibe. And i love your writing style i love that repetition, am really into poem ...

    Oct 9
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Te-re-re

    Hello! Am moon. Am being honest here. I found your poem quite tricky and mysterious, and honestly, I didn't fully understand its meaning. But I really enjoyed reading it, especially ...

    Oct 9
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Aftermath

    Hello! Am moon. I really felt sad while reading your poem, especially the line, "A mother still waited for her son on the porch." This line touched me so much ...

    Oct 9


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