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Re: I'm sorry.
hey, Meilin here ! i wanted to pop in and give some quick input on this piece. my first impression was that this expresses the theme (trauma and being emotionally ...
2h ago -
Re: Chapter 1 of " idiot, do you love me? "
hey! i just read and re read this and I’m gonna leave a review when I can collect my thoughts, but it looks v. promising !
3h ago -
Re: Nobody Is Coming
hi lilly! i really loved this piece mainly because of its format - poetry written in narrative style really intrigues me, and i know your work is beautiful
Oct 23 -
Re: Myrddin Custos: An Egg in Iwao's Spine
I’m gonna come back and leave a full review soon when i finish the series but honestly I’m just reading this for pleasure 😭
Oct 19 -
Re: Blue
oh hello there !!! i’ve had this poem on my ‘to be reviewed’ list for a while ! I really appreciate the time you took to review my work, so ...
Oct 16 -
Re: Everything in my dreams is me
salutations, Ellie !!! this caught my eye because, due to the title, i expected the piece to be about something completely different…. and i was surprised to say the least ...
Oct 9 -
Re: The World, Briefly
hey Lilly ! welcome to YWS, you can call me Vesh, Juke, or Chantray (i alternate between all three ^^). i haven’t done a review in a bit and this ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Promise
hey juke here ! i just wanted to pop in and say a few choice words about this poem, as it really caught my eye. for your first time doing ...
Sep 25 -
Re: fy enw i yw // my name is
uh oh, a Butterfly has landed to consume your work ! hellooo juke here, I’ll be using the butterfly review template to review your work as part of Team Butterflies ...
Sep 25 -
Re: Bathing in the Stars
hey Juke here! the title of this was v. eye-catching and i just had to check it out! overall this gives a very beautiful, harmonious feel, and the subtle astronomical ...
Sep 23 -
Re: Fallen Out Of Favor
hey PINK ! welcome to YWS !! first off, never say you’re not good at poetry - i think enjoying the process of writing them and loving your work is ...
Sep 23 -
Re: I Miss You, I Do
Juke here! this piece caught my eye because of its somber tone and use of firm wording, but mainly because i can relate to this, no matter how deeply, and ...
Sep 23 -
Re: Words
hey Juke here! I see a few other people have discovered this lovely poem, so forgive me for choosing to join the masses! firstly, let me just say that the ...
Sep 18 -
Re: candel
hey Juke here! i noticed you’re new to the site like me, so welcome to YWS !!!! i hope you enjoy being a ywser :D using the candle as a ...
Sep 18 -
Re: Wondering wistfully
RAH why didn’t i see this earlier ?! the first thing i would like to state: this piece tastes like honey (pun intended) the second: this is so vivid, sweet, ...
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