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Re: Names
Ello AJ ~! I read it thrice for good reasons. I really liked this piece of writing. It makes me delighted too as the poem comes to the edge. Morgan ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Friendships Fade, Memories Don't
This poem captures the quiet heartbreak of a friendship falling apart so well. Nostalgia is vivid in the first stanza. And I loved the rest as well. I like short ...
Oct 18 -
Re: 𝘛𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 thoughts again.
Elo ☀☀ I read this yesterday and I didn't review because I fell asleep. Today, I'm back here to review. It feels like a paragraph I'd so find in the ...
Oct 16 -
Re: The fault is mine
It sounds like a lament on regret. I really liked it ☀ It's very raw and honest so I hope that you're doing okay, young poet. I'll review it stanza ...
Oct 16 -
Re: Born to Live
I honestly loved this poem-! 🔅 Doesn't seem like just another bunch of words but I do feel like living after this, and I thank you for that. Have a ...
Oct 11 -
Re: Shall I admire you?
It's cute ngl! There is a really quiet, understated beauty to this poem that hits you right away. In a world where romantic poetry often swings toward heavy drama, this ...
Oct 6 -
Re: A poem about fall ;)
Sounds like a Western Autumn. The poem captures the sensory of Autumn in a fulfilling way. And one can find themselves relishing in that atmosphere you created in this poem. ...
Oct 6 -
Re: A Crimson Star
Hello write ☁ This piece feels like holding a breath right before something shatters. It’s heavy in a way that’s almost physical, like watching someone quietly tie their shoes while ...
Oct 6 -
Re: Pawprints Through the Night
It's a lovely poem. And it really shows the beautiful bond between you and your cat. It's my first time reading a poem on feline and I loved it. • ...
Oct 6 -
Re: The Moment That Never Was
I was thinking about that one day as well☁ How consciousness operates feels so abstract indeed. It feels like a swirl of thoughts making its way to turn into a ...
Oct 5 -
Re: 'My Rib'
The spirit of this poem is beautiful as well as haunting. It's like the heart is writing down to the body. It makes a person shift their attention right towards ...
Oct 5 -
Re: There's Nothing I Could Have Done
The opening lines set up such a sweet, intimate dynamic—falling for someone over a quick joke and sharing those random, hilarious moments that feel unique to two people. The line ...
Oct 3 -
Re: What do i need to do?
☁ Your poem captures that exact, frustrating feeling of overthinking every single emotion before you even let yourself feel it ☁️. It reads like a late-night note written straight from ...
Oct 3 -
Re: I just need to see your smile
This poem genuinely made my day ☁🔅 From the very first lines, there is such a pure, whimsical sweetness to every word. The idea of changing the seasons—making snow fall ...
Oct 3 -
Re: Your eyes were everything
Your poem, "Your eyes were everything," is so good! It’s seriously such a tender, vulnerable piece that really captures what it feels like to hold onto a quiet, unrequited crush ...
Oct 2
