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Hey! I really enjoyed this poem! It's short, but it has a very heavy theme of growing up and losing the innocence of youth. I love how the poem starts ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this story! I love this cozy vibe, and how nicely the relationship between Nico and Elliot developed throughout the story! Their feelings did not seem to ...

Hey! I loved the rawness and straightforwardness of this poem. The feelings described in the poem are very relatable, especially the one about waking up to the aftermath of a ...

Hey, I really liked this! The imagery is all very beautiful; the cliffs, the clouds of cotton, the waves crashing, the red orange dawn being swallowed by the sea. It's ...

Hey! I loved this poem! I loved how it showed the stark difference between the casual love of a family member and the sudden passion that a crush throws at ...

Hey! I just adored the idea of this poem transforming the pain into something tangible, like dust and a stain. The fact that the dust can be blown away with ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this one! I love how the poet moves from the simplest of descriptions to a more emotional and philosophical note. The tree, as a silent witness ...

Hey! I loved this poem. I loved how it has the feeling of two opposing forces waltzing together because of how true it is to the title. The repetition of ...

Hey! I absolutely loved this poem. I love the imagery you've used, the hunger, the bread, everything is so beautifully put together, representing longing, faith, and uncertainty. The initial imagery ...

Hey! I really liked this! It's so creepy, especially how they get louder as they fall to the music of the circus. I like how the Poppy is an adult ...

Hey! I really liked this one. It hooked me in immediately with the structure the way you went back and forth between Gallus and his memories about dying, showing his ...

Hey! I really liked this little piece of flash-fiction! I loved how you quickly introduce the context of the story and don't spend too much time explaining the world, as ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this reading. The way the narrator talks to the moon is so atmospheric because, instead of responding like a living creature, Selene does not return the same. ...