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Re: A lesson in victimhood
Hello Therwormwriter! It's AJ here for a review. This is a really cool poem and I like how you dove into this theme. This is something that should be brought ...
Oct 20 -
Re: A Glimpse so Strong
Hello Jaye! It's AJ here. This is such a sweet story. Now I'm not a romance person. Never much liked it but this is one of the first romance stories ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Two worlds
Hello Renwritessss! It's AJ here for a review. This little poem/story/thing, caught my eye. I do think you could add some imagery to this. Maybe even a metaphor or simile. ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Am i dead?
And last but not least, "Am i dead?"! I like the idea of going through the day. Each event making the narrator wonder. That morning, my reflection called me useless. ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Will you?
AJ's back for a review! Oh wow. Allowing yourself to be changed by the person you love. Changing into what they want. Going through each of the senses for this ...
Oct 17 -
Re: I never imagined..
Guess what? It's AJ! moon. Are you doing okay? The past few poems I've read by you have been talking about self harm. I'm someone who struggled with this for ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Hope I find my hope
Hello Lazie! It's AJ here for a review! I really like the idea of searching for hope. Wishing that anything could give you hope. The first stanza, Can the four-leaved ...
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Re: Debug Log (Autoimmune Disease)
Hello Skorpionne! It's AJ here for a review. This little poem caught my eye and I really like the story it tells. The struggle with living with an autoimmune disease ...
Oct 14 -
Re: Live or leave?
Hello moon1! Surprise, surprise, it's AJ here again for a review. This is a really hard hitting poem that's all too real for some people, like myself. I love the ...
Oct 13 -
Re: Narrative
Hello yuuki! It's AJ here! This is a really heart wrenching story about a loss and I had to reread it a couple times for it to really sink in. ...
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Re: A Guide to Potatoland - by Professor Mash (1)
Hello HMMHhehe! It's the magnificent AJ here for a review! I saw this in the spotlight and so, naturally I had to read it. This is a really funny little ...
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Re: Your eyes were everything
Hello moon1! It's AJ again. This is a really nice poem about that hopeless love. The feeling of no matter how much the narrator loves this person and holds onto ...
Oct 8 -
Re: Rainbow
Heyo HMMHhehe! It's the magnificent AJ here. First off, I am going to be completely honest. I really hate that red is before purple and it's backwards. But I refuse ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Aftermath
Hello wanyuan! It's AJ here for a review. This is a really good poem about the aftermath of a war. When wars happen we rarely think about the people lost ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Judgments
Heyo moon1! AJ again here for a review! This is super relatable. Being judged and a stranger's one sentence is what hits. They didn't mean to but it hurt. Being ...
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