I stopped looking at the moon the day I saw the glitter in your irises.
I stopped talking to my plant the day I heard your voice.
I feel like I'm in love with you,
I feel like I'm hallucinating everything.
I would give you the lotus that hidden deep in the forest just to see the diamonds on your lips.
I would give you the purple clouds from the evening sky just to see the way your eyes turn into crescent.
I feel like I'm in love with you,
I feel like I'm hallucinating everything.
I crushed the mirror that blushed when you stared at it, because your beauty could make the ocean laugh.
I killed the mosquito that laid its fingers upon your delicate skin, because your beauty could make the tree smile.
I feel like I'm in love with you,
I feel like I'm hallucinating everything.
I saw the stars are shamelessly blushing and staring at you all day.
Answer me,
can the moon sleep peacefully when its light is kissing your skin?
I feel like I'm in love with you,
No! I'm just hallucinating everything again.
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This was wonderful, and so beautifully written! The longing of how you stopped searching for things when you find so much you longed and waited for in a person! The outside beauty stops comparing when you find someone so perfect and amazing in your eyes and heart!!! This reminds me of me and my boyfriend, and I absolutely love it. Please keep writing my friend, great work!!!!!
Awesome poem.
This line reminds me of not knowing your in love. This is very good. You have a natural gift. You should keep doing poems like this. This is a very good and awesome, good word use poem. Your poem takes me to another world.